Today we talked about
everything we experienced on our fabulous trip last week to Cape Kidnappers.
There was so much to think about! Room10 have been challenged to write about one slice or
one bit of the trip. There were so many bits to the day...
* getting ready for the day
at home
* the ride out to Clifton
on the bus
* the journey along the
beach on the tractor / trailers
* having lunch
* using a 'long drop'
chemical toilet
* spending the day with a
parent (or grandparent)
* searching for fossils
* climbing the hill to the
plateaux colony
* travelling down the hill
* searching in the
tidal pools for shells and sea life
* telling Mum / Dad all
about it later
* lying in bed that night
remembering the amazing day
WOW! so many slices to the
day!
We cut up an apple with
each slice representing a little bit of the day. Check out all the slices!
Slice of life means...
a realistic description of life experiences.
This type of writing can
also be called 'a moment in time.'
We can't wait to share our
fabulous writing when we are finished!
My mum said this was the best trip ever and she wants to go back again. Her favourite was the tractor going in the water and learning about the earth quake fault lines on the cliffs from Reicoe.
ReplyDeleteTo be honest it was really hard to write story about trip to Cape Kidnappers. I tryed very very hard but I loved it. I want to go back there again. :) From Shekinah
ReplyDeleteI love writing my slice of life story. I think it is easier to write a slice of life story. It is so much fun! Are we going to publish our story's?
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Mrs Perry I love our slice of life story/moment in time. It is a fun and different way to do writing. Ezrah
ReplyDeleteMrs Perry I love our slice of life story moment in time. It is great! from Julie
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