Once there was a
peaceful forest and in this one tree there lived three baby owls, Sarah, Percy,
Bill and their mother. They snuggled together and fell asleep. An hour later
the family noticed something different. Their mummy was gone! They were very
worried. They peeped out of the tree, Bill groaned, “I want my mummy!”
Other animals
were looking for food at night. They were scared but they needed to be brave.
Sarah said, “She will come back with mice and things that are nice.” Percy
said, “I suppose so.” Bill said, “I want my mummy!” Sarah, Percy and Bill thought. All owls think
a lot. Sarah said, “I think we should all go on my branch.” They waited and
wished. Out of the bushes came… “Mummy!” they all cried together. But she was
wounded. Her wing was broken! She couldn’t fly for a week but luckily she
brought some food. Sarah, Percy and Bill were shocked. They flew down and
picked her up. They struggled but they managed to get there. They started
asking questions. There were bite marks on her wing. Bill said, “You should be
more careful.” They all started laughing and lived happily ever after. Well,
not really happily, but just happy.
By Wyatt
Once upon a time
there were three baby owls. Their names were Sarah, Percy and Bill. One day, in
the middle of the night they woke up and the three baby owls said, “Our mummy
is gone!” Then, the baby owls climbed out of the tree and thought. Sarah said,
“Maybe she has been eaten by a fox!” Then the little one said, “Where’s my
mummy?” (He kept on saying that until his mummy came.) Then they saw some
leaves falling from the sky up above them. Then, something strange happened.
There were some owls. There were ten owls and one of the owls was the baby
owl’s mummy. One of the baby owls said, “Is that our family?” Then his mummy
said, “Yes, that is our family.”
But, when it was
years later, the three baby owls were not little anymore. They were big and
strong and that was the day their grandparents finally left their home. Then
they all lived happily ever after.
By Reicoe
What fantastic writing you two! Your story would sound WAY cooler with some onomatopaeia in it. Gee, I haven't thought of that myself
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