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Saturday 17 May 2014
Could it Be Today? By Ana
Wow! Today was a new day, but not just a new day it was the opening ceremony for the new bike track. This morning when we got to the bike track it was very hot. It felt like I was on fire! But soon enough Mr Pearse came along and started to talk to us and the teachers, well mostly the kids though. As soon as everybody heard Mr Pearse we all stopped and looked at him silently and then he spoke about stuff.
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Great personal voice in your Writing Ana. I love the way you write just as if you were talking because it really hooks the reader into your story. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteAwesome Ana, I. Loved your writing, you are very expressive with the story! From Wendy
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